We watched a video about a polar bear and some dogs who were great friends! We then wrote about it and tried to explain why/how they became friends.
http://www.buzzcute.com/polar-bears-and-dogs-are-best-friends/
In the video the polar bear is hugging the dogs and the dogs are trying to get away. The polar bear is like a ball of snow. The dogs are friends with the polar bears becasue they both eat rabbits. The polar bear is sniffing the dogs bums, it looks funny. Maybe because the both swim they are friends. Tje man was watching the dogs and the polar bear. I like the colours of the dogs, I like the black ones and the white ones. They are really funny colours.
By Taryn
The polar bears were friends with the dogs. The polar bears are licking the dogs bums.
By Cassy
The Polar bears started to be friends with the dogs. The polar bears are bright as snow. They are probably friends because they have been there for a long time.
By Frances
The polar bear is cute and it made friends with the dogs.
By Leida
The polar bears are cute. The polar bear is white. He is hugging the dog. I like the colour of the dogs.
By Ross
The Polar bear was hugging the dog. The man was watching. I like it. It was funny. The sky was snowing.
By Kaedyn
In the video the polar bears are being friends with the dogs. I think they are friends because they both hunt for rabbits. They are probably used to being with the dogs and it is snowy there. The hug each other. The polar bears like to hug the dogs. Polar bears are so white that they look like a blob of snow.
By Caleb
Tuesday 19 May 2015
Monday 4 May 2015
Writing- Weeks 1/2/3
Some fantastic writing from the last two weeks in Term 2! We are all making great progress and doing very well!
Once upon a time three little sharks were playing among the sea. They were very hungry. The shark's friends were making a surprise party. "Quick here they come"" and ... surprise!
The End
By Eva
The soldier is carrying the other soldier. The soldier might be dead. The soldier is strong.
By Cassy
He is kind. He is heavy. The soldier got killed. The soldier is shot.
By Kaedyn.
The crosses are very special so you can remember the people who died in the war.
By Charlie.
I went to my Dad's maimai. Dad shot 6 ducks with Mike. I had soup for lunch.
By Ross (he received a principal award for this!)
The shark is finding fish and it is scary.
By Leida
The soldier is picking poppies to give to people or to put in water. The field is really big, there are a lot of poppies to pick. He picked poppies to make badges from the poppies. The poppies are very special. The soldier is wearing a uniform. They are special uniforms.
By Taryn
Once upon a time a big white shark ate a person at Stewart Island and the shark sees a mermaid. She screamed "ahh ahh" and she swam away screaming. She was so scared she went to New Zealand. She told a person.
The End
By Frances
Once upon a time three little sharks were playing among the sea. They were very hungry. The shark's friends were making a surprise party. "Quick here they come"" and ... surprise!
The End
By Eva
The soldier is carrying the other soldier. The soldier might be dead. The soldier is strong.
By Cassy
He is kind. He is heavy. The soldier got killed. The soldier is shot.
By Kaedyn.
The crosses are very special so you can remember the people who died in the war.
By Charlie.
I went to my Dad's maimai. Dad shot 6 ducks with Mike. I had soup for lunch.
By Ross (he received a principal award for this!)
The shark is finding fish and it is scary.
By Leida
The soldier is picking poppies to give to people or to put in water. The field is really big, there are a lot of poppies to pick. He picked poppies to make badges from the poppies. The poppies are very special. The soldier is wearing a uniform. They are special uniforms.
By Taryn
Once upon a time a big white shark ate a person at Stewart Island and the shark sees a mermaid. She screamed "ahh ahh" and she swam away screaming. She was so scared she went to New Zealand. She told a person.
The End
By Frances
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